Sorry for the delay in posting this! My Friday got away from me and suddenly, whoa! It’s Monday! Without any further delay, here’s J.K.’s query for your review.
Dear Ms. Unfeasible,
Finding her best friend dead in the river is bad enough. Becoming the killer’s next target is worse. Dealing with the emotions of every other person [...]
Happy Friday! Welcome to another edition of About My Query. Your mission: to read and comment below to help the author improve their query letter. Ready? Let’s go!
Dear Ms. Unfeasible,
A near-death experience grants Drazoral a glimpse of her future, but after hearing that her life is the key to cleansing her home planet, she [...]
Last one! I look forward to your helpful comments, and will add my thoughts this weekend.
Dear Ms. Testerman:
Thank you for hosting an “About My Query” session. I am a huge fan of your blog and Tumblr. I would appreciate your consideration of BLOOD PACT, my young adult fantasy novel complete at 67,000 words.
Best friends Faylinn [...]
We made it to the final day! Thanks again for all your comments and helpful advice to the writers who offered their queries for review. I’m going to post one more query with my comments below, then a second query this afternoon where I’ll ask you to comment FIRST. Let’s do this thing, shall we?
Dear [...]
We’re coming up towards the end of our two-week palooza of About My Query posts! Here’s today’s, and remember, please keep those comments coming!
Dear (Agent),
One day, thirteen-year-old Elena decides not to write stories during class like she normally does and instead writes that the class bully gets detention. He does a minute later. It’s got [...]
