Ask Daphne! About My Query LXXXIX

November 18th, 2011

We made it to the final day! Thanks again for all your comments and helpful advice to the writers who offered their queries for review. I’m going to post one more query with my comments below, then a second query this afternoon where I’ll ask you to comment FIRST. Let’s do this thing, shall we? […]

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Ask Daphne! About My Query LXXXVIII

November 17th, 2011

We’re coming up towards the end of our two-week palooza of About My Query posts! Here’s today’s, and remember, please keep those comments coming! Dear (Agent), One day, thirteen-year-old Elena decides not to write stories during class like she normally does and instead writes that the class bully gets detention. He does a minute later. […]

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Ask Daphne! About My Query LXXXVII

November 16th, 2011

Some unforgetable shoes for T.P. — although I may have already posted them once, I can’t remember. (See what I did there?) Continuing the theme, here’s today’s About My Query post: Dear Ms. Unfeasible, A first love is hard to forget. Luckily for Liz Wagner hers moves away, but when his grandmother is diagnosed with […]

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Ask Daphne! About My Query LXXXVI

November 15th, 2011

Another day, another About My Query post! What do you think of this? Dear Ms. Testerman: Mistakes. Can’t live with them, can’t outrun them. For seventeen-year-old Emma Wrangton, life is a series of mud-splattered incidents propelled by one mistake after another. Mistake #1: Allowing her best friend, Riley, to convince her that immersing her tomboy […]

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Ask Daphne! About My Query LXXXV

November 14th, 2011

Happy Monday, all! Welcome back to another week of About My Query posts. Are your commenting fingers ready? Let’s go! Dear Daphne Unfeasible, I Closed my eyes is a completed 76,000 word urban fantasy/paranormal thriller. In it, thirty-year-old Tina Sanford is perplexed over the global phenomenon baffling the experts. Beautiful and talented women are being […]

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